Once upon a time there was a princess of the Felinoraen kingdom, who lived a storybook life. She was surrounded by her parents, waited on by servants and had everything that she could ever want. However, when she's sent away in order to learn about her natural abilities, disaster strikes causing unexpected twists in her life. Eventually she'll be faced with life changing decisions, between love and wealth. Which way will she choose?
Prologue (Complete)
Chapter 1: A Forgotten Past (Complete)
Chapter 2: A Wanderer (Coming Soon)
Monday, March 31, 2008
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2 comments:
Not bad... But needs ALOT of editing. Rephrasing, grammar, etc.
I like the story so far, though.
Thanks for your feedback. I went over what I have so far for this one, and realized your right... lol. Believe it or not, it was mostly written while I was actually quite tired. As soon as I feel up to it I intend on going back fixing all of that up.
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